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ECCジュニア卒業生の英文

★塚崎優子先生へ

 

遅くなって申し訳ないです；；

なんとか書き上がりました…！

 

英語でプレゼンをしろという授業がありまして、

3つの題材から選べるんですけど選んだのがこれです。

 

300語以上で書けとのことで

長々とほんとすみません　泣

お願いします；；

文法的におかしいとか言い回しが変とか

ご指摘いただけると嬉しいですm(_ _)m

 

(Maliena より）

 

 

ECCジュニア卒業生（Maliena） の英文

(現在、県立長田高校２年生）

 

Ｑ：

"What do you want most in a friend-

someone who is intelligent ,

or someone who has a sense of humor ,

or someone who is reliable?

Which one of these characteristics is most important to you ?

Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice."

 

Ａ：（訂正後）

I have made friends with many characteristics in my school life.

 

Some are intelligent , some are reliable and some have a sense of humor.

 

Of course, all friends are precious and irreplaceable .

 

But I think that

friends who have a sense of humor are the most important for me.

 

First, if I have an intelligent friend,

 

I can ask her to help me study anytime.

 

Especially,

 

when I need help with a difficult question just before an exam,

 

She can teach me .

 

I will be able to take an exam with confidence.

 

Addition ,

 

intelligent people generally have various views on certain matters.

 

Therefore, if I talk over about something with such people,

 

I can broaden my horizons.

 

Second, if I have a reliable friend,

 

They can help with many situations in my school life.

 

For example,

 

when I forget a committee meeting ,

 

my reliable friend will tell it to me.

 

When I suffer from study,

 

human relations and love,

 

they will guide me.

 

I have been comforted by my friends' wordss.

 

Such friends are very important for a careless person like me.

 

But it is also a fact that I depend on such friends too much.

 

Then, if I have a friend who has a sense of humor, how is it?

 

Most of such friends are friendly.

 

I tend to be shy, but I can socialize with such friends.

 

What’s more, I can even enjoy a chat in my daily life.

 

If the friend didn’t have a sense of humor,

 

I might have to be careful what I say to the friend.

 

I can’t talk frankly.

 

By the way,

 

I had an opportunity to make friends with people who do a comic dialogue.

 

They have a good sense of humor.

 

When I talked with them,

 

I forgot time and laughed from first to last.

 

I think that humans are released from worries and suffering while laughing.

 

A sense of humor can make such laughter.

 

From the above things,

 

I think that friends who have a sense of humor are the most important for me.

 

However, those particular people aren’t necessarily the best.

 

Humanity is created by having many different friends. I think.

Accordingly,

 

I want to value friends of mine who have many different characteristics from now on.

 

 

☆Dear Maliena ,

 

文章が固過ぎるとおもしろくないので

demonstration する時は

文語より会話文の方が better です！

聞いて読んで話して分かりやすい英文に

心掛けましょうね♪

 

下記参照して下さい！(^_-)-☆

 

・A Friend in Need is a Friend Indeed

（まさかの時の友こそ真の友）

 

Do you know the expression , “a fair-weather friend “?

（天気のよい時の友達）

 

This is someone who is only your friend everything is fun and easy ,

Like a warm sunny day .

A fair-weather friend will disappear if you get into trouble or if you need help .

 

But a true friend will never disappear when you need help .

“A friend in need is a friend indeed .”

When you’re in need of help ,

you’ll find out who your true friends are .

 

Sometimes you may feel jealous of popular people ,

but there’s no need .

Most people only have a handful of true friends .

 

What kind of friend are you when your friends need you ?

 

 

・Laughing Keeps You Healthy

（笑いで健康維持）

 

Do you ever laugh so hard that you can’t breathe ?

Your sides may hurt and tears may come from your eyes ,

but laughing is actually very good for you .

When you’re in a difficult situation ,

you may feel angry or stressed .

These feelings cause your body to produce some bad chemicals .

But laughing switches off these chemicals .

So if you’re angry or stressed ,

one of the best things you can do is laugh .

Laughing helps to reduce anger , stress and pain .

So you should always try to laugh as much as possible .

 

Smiling also has the same effect .

So if you can’t laugh , just smile .

 

 

★塚崎優子先生へ

 

さっき受け取らせていただきました(*^^*)
お忙しいのにほんとありがとうございました(；∀；)!!
めちゃくちゃ助かりました！
勉強なりましたm(__)m
もっと自然な文書けるようになりたいものです。
またなんやお願いするやもしれませんが、
よろしくお願いします(´・ω・`)

 

(Maliena より）

 

 

☆Dear Maliena ,

 

お疲れ様でした！(#^.^#)

今回はメールで送ってくれたので
チェックしやすかったです♪(^_−)−☆

頑張って書いた！というのがよ～く分かりました☆
偉いですね～！(^з^)-☆

会話文ではこういう言葉使わない…とか(^_^;)
Japaneseマインド…とか f^_^;)
変えたい表現は多々ありましたが、
Malienaが言いたい表現を出来るだけ変えずに訂正しましたよ(^_−)−☆

今回はライヴ後で仕事以外に予定をあまり入れてなかったので(^^)
すぐにチェック出来ましたが、(^_-)
いつも先生は貧乏暇無しなので(/ _ ; )
ライヴ前や週末などスケジュールが詰まってる時は(^^;;
時間に空きが全く無いほど多忙なので(~_~;)
見てあげる暇はありませんが、m(_ _)m
日にち待てるならまたどうぞ～( ^_^)/~~~♡

これからも頑張って下さいね！(^-^)/
期待しております☆（＾Ｏ＾☆♪