★塚崎優子先生へ
遅くなって申し訳ないです；；
なんとか書き上がりました…！
英語でプレゼンをしろという授業がありまして、
3つの題材から選べるんですけど選んだのがこれです。
300語以上で書けとのことで
長々とほんとすみません 泣
お願いします；；
文法的におかしいとか言い回しが変とか
ご指摘いただけると嬉しいですm(_ _)m
(Maliena より）
ECCジュニア卒業生（Maliena） の英文
(現在、県立長田高校２年生）
Ｑ：
"What do you want most in a friend-
someone who is intelligent ,
or someone who has a sense of humor ,
or someone who is reliable?
Which one of these characteristics is most important to you ?
Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice."
Ａ：（訂正後）
I have made friends with many characteristics in my school life.
Some are intelligent , some are reliable and some have a sense of humor.
Of course, all friends are precious and irreplaceable .
But I think that
friends who have a sense of humor are the most important for me.
First, if I have an intelligent friend,
I can ask her to help me study anytime.
Especially,
when I need help with a difficult question just before an exam,
She can teach me .
I will be able to take an exam with confidence.
Addition ,
intelligent people generally have various views on certain matters.
Therefore, if I talk over about something with such people,
I can broaden my horizons.
Second, if I have a reliable friend,
They can help with many situations in my school life.
For example,
when I forget a committee meeting ,
my reliable friend will tell it to me.
When I suffer from study,
human relations and love,
they will guide me.
I have been comforted by my friends' wordss.
Such friends are very important for a careless person like me.
But it is also a fact that I depend on such friends too much.
Then, if I have a friend who has a sense of humor, how is it?
Most of such friends are friendly.
I tend to be shy, but I can socialize with such friends.
What’s more, I can even enjoy a chat in my daily life.
If the friend didn’t have a sense of humor,
I might have to be careful what I say to the friend.
I can’t talk frankly.
By the way,
I had an opportunity to make friends with people who do a comic dialogue.
They have a good sense of humor.
When I talked with them,
I forgot time and laughed from first to last.
I think that humans are released from worries and suffering while laughing.
A sense of humor can make such laughter.
From the above things,
I think that friends who have a sense of humor are the most important for me.
However, those particular people aren’t necessarily the best.
Humanity is created by having many different friends. I think.
Accordingly,
I want to value friends of mine who have many different characteristics from now on.
☆Dear Maliena ,
文章が固過ぎるとおもしろくないので
demonstration する時は
文語より会話文の方が better です！
聞いて読んで話して分かりやすい英文に
心掛けましょうね♪
下記参照して下さい！(^_-)-☆
・A Friend in Need is a Friend Indeed
（まさかの時の友こそ真の友）
Do you know the expression , “a fair-weather friend “?
（天気のよい時の友達）
This is someone who is only your friend everything is fun and easy ,
Like a warm sunny day .
A fair-weather friend will disappear if you get into trouble or if you need help .
But a true friend will never disappear when you need help .
“A friend in need is a friend indeed .”
When you’re in need of help ,
you’ll find out who your true friends are .
Sometimes you may feel jealous of popular people ,
but there’s no need .
Most people only have a handful of true friends .
What kind of friend are you when your friends need you ?
・Laughing Keeps You Healthy
（笑いで健康維持）
Do you ever laugh so hard that you can’t breathe ?
Your sides may hurt and tears may come from your eyes ,
but laughing is actually very good for you .
When you’re in a difficult situation ,
you may feel angry or stressed .
These feelings cause your body to produce some bad chemicals .
But laughing switches off these chemicals .
So if you’re angry or stressed ,
one of the best things you can do is laugh .
Laughing helps to reduce anger , stress and pain .
So you should always try to laugh as much as possible .
Smiling also has the same effect .
So if you can’t laugh , just smile .
★塚崎優子先生へ
さっき受け取らせていただきました(*^^*)
お忙しいのにほんとありがとうございました(；∀；)!!
めちゃくちゃ助かりました！
勉強なりましたm(__)m
もっと自然な文書けるようになりたいものです。
またなんやお願いするやもしれませんが、
よろしくお願いします(´・ω・`)
(Maliena より）
☆Dear Maliena ,
お疲れ様でした！(#^.^#)
今回はメールで送ってくれたので
チェックしやすかったです♪(^_−)−☆
頑張って書いた！というのがよ～く分かりました☆
偉いですね～！(^з^)-☆
会話文ではこういう言葉使わない…とか(^_^;)
Japaneseマインド…とか f^_^;)
変えたい表現は多々ありましたが、
Malienaが言いたい表現を出来るだけ変えずに訂正しましたよ(^_−)−☆
今回はライヴ後で仕事以外に予定をあまり入れてなかったので(^^)
すぐにチェック出来ましたが、(^_-)
いつも先生は貧乏暇無しなので(/ _ ; )
ライヴ前や週末などスケジュールが詰まってる時は(^^;;
時間に空きが全く無いほど多忙なので(~_~;)
見てあげる暇はありませんが、m(_ _)m
日にち待てるならまたどうぞ～( ^_^)/~~~♡
これからも頑張って下さいね！(^-^)/
期待しております☆（＾Ｏ＾☆♪
