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I went to a movie with my husband this afrernoon.We saw " WonderWoman" and it was nice!

The actress as WonderWoman was so sexy and pretty and the main actor as her partner was so handsome,but I felt the story was ,this is just my opinion, somehow alright...

The action scene is wonderfull to see, which made me excited but the details of the story are very rough.I noticed them and thought they ruined this movie,but I think over all that the movie was great.I like it.





今日の午後、旦那と一緒にワンダーウーマンを見に行きました。とても、良かったです。
ワンダーウーマンん演じた主演の女優さんはすっごいセクシーできれいだし、パートナーを演じた男優さんも超ハンサムだったんですが、ストーリーは、私の意見ですが、まあまあだったと思います。

アクションシーンはすごかったんですが、物語の細かい所がなんだか雑で、それが話しを面白くなくしているきがしたのです。
でも、まあ、全体的にはいい映画だと思いました。結構好きです。

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I'm worn out.

I have to cook dinner,but I don't feel  like doing anything.



すっごい疲れた。
夕飯作んなきゃいけないけど、なんにもやる気が起きない。
けど、これ書いてる…。

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It was sunny but not too hot.I felt it was much cooler than summer days..

Autum is my favorite season,becsuse the air is not too hot and not too cold.
Don't you think it's such a nice season?


Today,I worked from10 PM to 9PM, so I got so tired.

I talked to a lot of customers from other countries to explain our services.

Some of them spoke some Japanese and the others didn't speak it at all.


One of them was an international student from France.She spoke Japanese well so I was able to understsand almost what she said.She also spoke English fluently,so I felt

"How wonderful she is! she can speak three laungages!

She came there with her friends.They coudn't speak Japanese but she helped them to comunicate with me in very nice Japanese.She seemed like she enjoyed it and I also enjoyed seeing thier conversation.

I hope thier stay in Japan will be great.


今日は晴れ。でも夏の日よりもずっと涼しく感じました。
暑くもないしさむすぎもしないこの季節が私はとても好きです。とてもいい季節だと思いませんか？


今日は朝の10時から夜の10時まで仕事でめっちゃ疲れました。

たくさんの外国人のお客さんに私たちのサービスについて説明しました。

日本語が話せる人もいたけど、話せない人もたくさんのいました。

その中の一人にフランス人の留学の女の子がいました。彼女は結構上手な日本語が話せて、しかも流暢な英語も話せたのです。
私は、3種類も言葉を使い分けられるなんて、凄い！と感心しました。

本当に凄い。かっこいい。

彼女は他にも友達も何人か連れてきていました、彼らは日本語が話せなかったのですが、日本語が話せる彼女が通訳になって私と話すのを手伝ってくれたのです。とても上手な日本語で！

彼女はそれを楽しんでいるように見えました。
私も彼らの会話を聞くのは楽しかったです。

彼らの日本滞在が、素晴らしいものになりますように！

Gaba 無料添削(添削前) 日記(5) Peony 牡丹

庭の牡丹の花が咲きました。

数年前に奈良に旅行に行ったときに、牡丹で有名な長谷寺で買ってきて庭に植えたものです。

長谷寺に行ったときには時期がちょっと早過ぎて満開の牡丹が見られなかったので、また今度見に行きたいな。




Peony's flowers in my garden are in full bloom today and they are fantastic!

The folwers originally came from Hase dera in Nara prefecture.The temple is famous for a lot of beautiful peony's flowers.

When I went on a trip to Nara a few years ago,I bought the little peony,brought it to my home and planted in my garden.

Every early summer,I can see the amazing flowers,which makes me so happy.

In the past trip, I saw few flowers because It was too early to see them.That was so sad.I hope I'll go there again and see the awesome flowers!

英語日記（添削前）

July.5.2016
It stopped raining in the morning.
I worked until 7PM and went shopping to buy some ingredients for dinner on my way home.
I thought I bought too many things and they were so heavy, which made me so blue.I somehow regreted to do it.So I should have asked my husband to buy these things because I noticed that he'll be off tomorrow.I failed.