Gaba 無料英文添削（3）

英文添削第2弾



書く英文は日記にすることにしました。
多分それが一番英語の練習になると思ったので。
いざ書き始めると、日常の些細なことすらどう言ったらいいか分からない事実に直面。
修行あるのみですね。

下が英文の添削済み分です。
簡単な英語しか使ってないので大丈夫かなーと思ったら結構直されてました。
主に、aなどの名詞の冠詞や複数形の後につけるSが抜けているのと、過去形にし忘れたりしていたところが訂正されて帰ってきました。
日本語では考えられないほど英語話す人は名詞の数を表す冠詞にうるさいです。レッスンでも冠詞（aとかthe)を入れ忘れると即座に訂正されます。
まだ、慣れないのでけっこう忘れちゃうので意識して話さなきゃいけません。


2015.9.20

It was a sunny today.
But I didn't anything. I stayed in my house,and I have watched TV since I wake woke up in the morning on my sofa.

Because I was very tired .

I didn't want to anything.
Thers were manythings to do. But I could do nothing.



2015.9.22

It was a sunnyday today too

I had to work for longtime in my office.
usually I start to work at nine o'clock.
But today I stated to worked at eight o'clock.

So I should leave my house at six o'clock

I was so sleepy all day.



2015.9.23

It was a sunnyday.

I was happy today.
Because my customer said to me
" You are so helpful" for my work.
She spoke English. And I can't speak English well.
But I tried to help her.
So she said the word for me.


2015.9.25

It was raining today
Today iphone6s,6splus were realesed from by Apple.


2015. 9.26

It was cloudy today.

Today I went to galally watching pictures. The pictures are my mother's drawing.

2015.9.27

It was cloudy today.
My mother gave me a bunch of grapes
So it was they were delicious.