Zhel先生が、私の日記を添削してくれました。大変嬉しいです。
Hello there Mr. Seiki!
Below is the correction of your journal.
See you next class!
Your sentence: Nico Nico-san, of course, is also a pleasure.
Better sentence: Nico-san of course, was also pleased.
Your sentence: I am very grateful to the couple and my second son.
Better sentence: I am very grateful to the couple and to my second son.
Your sentences: The weight is 64.9 kg (65.8 yesterday). Blood pressure is 120/88 (Yesterday 124/76). The pulse is 69 (65 yesterday).
Better sentences: My weight is 64.9 kg (Yesterday was 65.8), my blood pressure is 120/88 (Yesterday was124/76), and my pulse is 69 (yesterday was 65).
Your sentence: In the afternoon, I took online English conversation.
Better sentence: In the afternoon, I will take online English conversation lessons.
Hello there Mr. Seiki!
Below is the correction of your journal.
See you next class!
Your sentence: Nico Nico-san, of course, is also a pleasure.
Better sentence: Nico-san of course, was also pleased.
Your sentence: I am very grateful to the couple and my second son.
Better sentence: I am very grateful to the couple and to my second son.
Your sentences: The weight is 64.9 kg (65.8 yesterday). Blood pressure is 120/88 (Yesterday 124/76). The pulse is 69 (65 yesterday).
Better sentences: My weight is 64.9 kg (Yesterday was 65.8), my blood pressure is 120/88 (Yesterday was124/76), and my pulse is 69 (yesterday was 65).
Your sentence: In the afternoon, I took online English conversation.
Better sentence: In the afternoon, I will take online English conversation lessons.