Hello there Mr. Seiki! Here is the correction of your journal. See you next class!
Your sentence: I weigh in 64.4 kilograms.
Better sentence: I weigh 64.4 kilograms. Or My weight is 64.4 kilograms.
Your sentence: I watched a lot of movies Harrison Ford and Arnold Schwarzenegger.
Better sentence: I watched a lot of movies of Harrison Ford and Arnold Schwarzenegger. Or I watched a lot of Harrison Ford and Arnold Schwarzenegger’s movies.
Your sentences: The granddaughter got the message of Valentine's Day and chocolate. (fried dough cake)
"Happy Valentine day! Chocolate will give you. Please do it forever and do your best snow off the road."
Better sentences: I got a message and chocolate from my granddaughter on Valentine's Day. It says "Happy Valentine’s day! This chocolate is for you. Please do your best in cleaning the snow off the road."
Your sentence: I weigh in 64.4 kilograms.
Better sentence: I weigh 64.4 kilograms. Or My weight is 64.4 kilograms.
Your sentence: I watched a lot of movies Harrison Ford and Arnold Schwarzenegger.
Better sentence: I watched a lot of movies of Harrison Ford and Arnold Schwarzenegger. Or I watched a lot of Harrison Ford and Arnold Schwarzenegger’s movies.
Your sentences: The granddaughter got the message of Valentine's Day and chocolate. (fried dough cake)
"Happy Valentine day! Chocolate will give you. Please do it forever and do your best snow off the road."
Better sentences: I got a message and chocolate from my granddaughter on Valentine's Day. It says "Happy Valentine’s day! This chocolate is for you. Please do your best in cleaning the snow off the road."