Hello there Mr. Seiki! Below is the correction of your journal. See you next class. Have a great day! Journal (February 13, 2019).docx
Your sentences: I ate breakfast at 6:30 am. That was delicious.
Better sentences: I ate breakfast at 6:30 am. It was delicious. or I ate delicious breakfast at 6:30 am.
Your sentence: We cleaned snow together.
Better sentence: We cleaned the snow off the road/car/roof together.
Your sentences: I celebrated the seventh anniversary since I started facebook. February 7th was that anniversary. Thank you for seeing.
Better sentences: I celebrated seven years of using Facebook on February 7th. Thank you for checking my account.
Your sentences: From January 2017, I started online English conversation, two years passed in quickly.
Better sentences: I started studying English online in January 2017. Two years passed quickly.
Happy Wednesday Mr. Seiki! Thank you so much for taking a class with me again. I'd like to commend you for doing an amazing job today. You were able to respond to follow-up questions. You managed to express your thoughts in an organized manner. In addition, you were able to catch the two extra sentences in our conversation activity. You just need to continue building your vocabulary but don't worry, I'm here to help you. I really look forward to talking with you again. See you. Have a wonderful day!