周囲を囲む；periphery

Me: In technical writing, when an object is entirely surrounded by a wire, which of the following sentences describing this configuration is better? 1) The wire surrounds the periphery of the object. 2) The wire surrounds a periphery of the object. 3) The wire surrounds the peripheries of the object. 4) The wire surrounds peripheries of the object.

 

ChatGPT

In technical writing, the most precise and clear sentence for describing an object entirely surrounded by a wire is:

1. The wire surrounds the periphery of the object.

This sentence indicates that the wire encircles the outer boundary of the object, which is likely what you intend to convey. The other options either imply multiple peripheries or are less clear in their meaning.

Me: OK. Then, how about if there are two objects not touching each other but arranged next to each other and surrounded by the wire? Which of the following sentences is better? 1) The wire surrounds the periphery of the objects. 2) The wire surrounds the peripheries of the objects.

 

ChatGPT

In the case where there are two objects not touching each other but both surrounded by the wire, the better sentence is:

2. The wire surrounds the peripheries of the objects.

This sentence indicates that the wire encircles the outer boundaries of both objects, which accurately describes the scenario.

Me:

Or you can just say, "The wire surrounds the objects," am I right?

 

ChatGPT

Yes, you are right. Saying "The wire surrounds the objects" is a clear and concise way to describe the scenario where the wire surrounds both objects without specifying the details of their peripheries. This phrasing effectively communicates the intended meaning.

Me: Is the use of "the periphery" mere redundancy? What purpose, if any, would it serve? Why would someone want to use "the periphery" when the same thing can be expressed without it?

 

ChatGPT

Using "the periphery" is not necessarily redundant; it serves to provide more specific information about the manner in which the wire surrounds the objects. Here are some reasons why someone might choose to use "the periphery":

1. Precision: It clarifies that the wire is specifically around the outer boundary or edge of the objects, rather than simply enclosing the objects in an undefined manner.

2. Technical Clarity: In technical writing, details matter. Specifying "the periphery" can eliminate ambiguity, ensuring that the reader understands exactly where the wire is positioned.

3. Contextual Importance: In some contexts, particularly in engineering, architecture, or design, the exact placement of the wire may be critical. Describing it as surrounding "the periphery" underscores its precise location.

4. Descriptive Emphasis: It emphasizes the relationship between the wire and the specific parts of the objects it surrounds, which might be relevant for the reader's understanding of the setup.

In summary, while "the wire surrounds the objects" is clear and sufficient in many cases, adding "the periphery" can enhance precision and clarity, especially in technical or detailed descriptions.