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可能性が低減された

2025-02-28 00:04:32 | ChatGPT
衝撃による破損の可能性が低減された車両用ライト。
ChatGPT:

"A vehicle light with a reduced likelihood of damage due to impact."

Key Translation Points:

  • 「衝撃による」→「due to impact」
    • Specifies the cause of potential damage.
  • 「破損の可能性」→「likelihood of damage」
    • "Likelihood" conveys the probability aspect, keeping it natural.
  • 「低減された」→「with a reduced likelihood」
    • Keeps the passive nuance while making the phrase flow naturally.
  • 「車両用ライト」→「vehicle light」
    • General but precise term for a light used in vehicles.

Let me know if you prefer a different nuance, such as emphasizing the structural design that reduces damage!

あなた:
How about 1. A vehicle light that has a reduced likelihood of damage due to impact. 2. A vehicle light of which the likelihood of damage due to impact is reduced.
ChatGPT:

Both of your options are grammatically correct, but the first one sounds more natural and commonly used in technical descriptions. Here's my assessment:

  1. "A vehicle light that has a reduced likelihood of damage due to impact."

    • This is natural and clear.
    • "That has" makes it easy to read and avoids awkward phrasing.
    • Commonly used in technical English and product descriptions.
  2. "A vehicle light of which the likelihood of damage due to impact is reduced."

    • This structure is grammatically correct but slightly awkward.
    • "Of which" is less commonly used in modern technical English.
    • The sentence sounds more formal and less fluid than the first one.

Recommendation:

The first option is better for naturalness and readability.

If you want a slightly more concise and formal version:
"A vehicle light with a reduced likelihood of damage due to impact."

Would you like to emphasize any particular aspect, such as structural design or shock absorption?

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