Hello again Mr. Seiki! Below is the correction of your journal. See you on Tuesday!
Your sentence: I have 9 points for the remaining lesson points now.
Better sentence: I have 9 remaining lesson points now.
Your sentence: The expiration date is March 15th.
Better sentence: The expiration date is on March 15th.
Your sentence: I misunderstood that the expiration date is March 25th.
Better sentence: I thought the expiration date is on March 25th.
Your sentence: I will join the singing voice cafe from 1 pm.
Better sentence: I will join the singing voice cafe at 1 pm.
Your sentence: I will pick up my granddaughter to the nursery school at 4:30 pm.
Better sentence: I will pick up my granddaughter from the nursery school at 4:30 pm.
Your sentence: I have 9 points for the remaining lesson points now.
Better sentence: I have 9 remaining lesson points now.
Your sentence: The expiration date is March 15th.
Better sentence: The expiration date is on March 15th.
Your sentence: I misunderstood that the expiration date is March 25th.
Better sentence: I thought the expiration date is on March 25th.
Your sentence: I will join the singing voice cafe from 1 pm.
Better sentence: I will join the singing voice cafe at 1 pm.
Your sentence: I will pick up my granddaughter to the nursery school at 4:30 pm.
Better sentence: I will pick up my granddaughter from the nursery school at 4:30 pm.