オンライン英会話では、毎回事前にZhel先生へ私の日記を送っています。
先生は、丁寧に添削して、フェードバックしてくれます。
この添削で、日本語と英語との表現の違いや定冠詞・助詞の使い方が少しずつわかってきました。
Hi again Mr. Seiki! Here is the correction of your journal. See you!
Your sentence: I updated my Facebook account this morning.
Note: If you are referring to your photos on Facebook, please say it this way.
I uploaded photos on Facebook this morning.
Your sentence: I got lots “like” and comments from my friends.
Better sentence: I got lots of “like” and comments from my friends.
Your sentence: A granddaughter's graduation ceremony was held at Aomori Kokusai Hotel On March 17th.
Better sentence: My granddaughter's graduation ceremony was held at Aomori Kokusai Hotel on March 17th.
先生は、丁寧に添削して、フェードバックしてくれます。
この添削で、日本語と英語との表現の違いや定冠詞・助詞の使い方が少しずつわかってきました。
Hi again Mr. Seiki! Here is the correction of your journal. See you!
Your sentence: I updated my Facebook account this morning.
Note: If you are referring to your photos on Facebook, please say it this way.
I uploaded photos on Facebook this morning.
Your sentence: I got lots “like” and comments from my friends.
Better sentence: I got lots of “like” and comments from my friends.
Your sentence: A granddaughter's graduation ceremony was held at Aomori Kokusai Hotel On March 17th.
Better sentence: My granddaughter's graduation ceremony was held at Aomori Kokusai Hotel on March 17th.
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