Good evening Mr. Seiki! Below is the correction of your journal. See you tomorrow. Enjoy your dinner!
Your sentence: The Great East Japan Earthquake occurred on March 11, eight years ago.
Better sentence: It’s been eight years since the great East Japan earthquake occurred.
Your sentence: I ate emergency food for disaster prevention last night.
Better sentence: I ate emergency food for disaster last night.
Your sentence: I enjoyed singing cafe on March 9th.
Better sentence: I enjoyed singing at the cafe on March 9th.
Your sentence: My two teachers appeared.
Better sentences: My two teachers arrived. My two teachers performed.
Your sentence: The Great East Japan Earthquake occurred on March 11, eight years ago.
Better sentence: It’s been eight years since the great East Japan earthquake occurred.
Your sentence: I ate emergency food for disaster prevention last night.
Better sentence: I ate emergency food for disaster last night.
Your sentence: I enjoyed singing cafe on March 9th.
Better sentence: I enjoyed singing at the cafe on March 9th.
Your sentence: My two teachers appeared.
Better sentences: My two teachers arrived. My two teachers performed.