ChatGPT:
This voltage measurement device improves the estimation accuracy of the voltage.
あなた:
ChatGPT:
Comparison of the Three Options:
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"Improves voltage estimation accuracy" ✅ (Most natural and concise)
- This is the most concise and commonly used phrasing in technical writing.
- "Voltage estimation accuracy" is treated as a compound noun, making it smooth and efficient.
- Example: "This device improves battery voltage estimation accuracy."
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"Improves the estimation accuracy of voltage" ✅ (Correct but slightly wordy)
- The definite article "the" before "estimation accuracy" makes the phrase more formal and explicit.
- This structure is technically correct but less commonly used compared to Option 1.
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"Improves the estimation accuracy of a voltage" ❌ (Less common and potentially unclear)
- The indefinite article "a" before "voltage" might imply any random voltage, which could sound unnatural unless multiple voltages are being considered.
- "Voltage" is often treated as an uncountable noun in technical contexts, so using "a voltage" is less typical.
Final Recommendation:
✔ "This voltage measurement device improves voltage estimation accuracy." (Most natural and widely used)
✔ If more formality or clarity is needed: "This voltage measurement device improves the estimation accuracy of voltage."
❌ Avoid "a voltage" unless referring to a specific case where distinguishing between different voltages is necessary.
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あなた:
この電圧測定装置は、車両に積載されたバッテリーの電圧の推定精度を向上させる。ChatGPT:
This voltage measurement device improves the estimation accuracy of the voltage of a battery mounted on a vehicle.
あなた:
ChatGPT:
Comparison of Your Options:
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"Accuracy of a voltage of a battery mounted on a vehicle" ❌ (Unnatural)
- "A voltage" sounds unnatural because voltage is typically uncountable in this context.
- It might imply that the battery has multiple distinct voltages, which is not the usual way to describe battery voltage.
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"Accuracy of voltage of a battery mounted on a vehicle" ✅ (Acceptable, but slightly uncommon)
- "Voltage" without an article is more natural in technical writing because voltage is generally an uncountable quantity.
- However, it still feels a bit wordy.
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"Accuracy of voltages of a battery mounted on a vehicle" ❌ (Unnatural)
- "Voltages" (plural) would only be used if the battery has multiple separate voltage levels, which is unlikely in this context.
- Batteries usually have one measurable voltage at a given time, so the plural form is misleading.
Best Alternative for Natural and Concise Technical Writing:
✔ "This voltage measurement device improves the estimation accuracy of the battery voltage in a vehicle."
✔ Alternatively: "This voltage measurement device improves the accuracy of estimating the voltage of a battery mounted on a vehicle." (If rewording for clarity.)
Final Recommendation:
- Avoid "a voltage" or "voltages" since battery voltage is generally uncountable.
- Option 2 is the best among your choices, but a more natural phrasing would be "the battery voltage in a vehicle."
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