１つの名詞に係る複数の名詞、AのBとC

車体の重量に相関する第1情報及び色に相関する第2情報

ChatGPT:

ChatGPT

First information correlated with the weight of the vehicle body and second information correlated with its color.

あなた:

How about 1. First information correlated with the weight and second information correlated with the color of the vehicle body. 2. First information correlated with the weight of the vehicle body and second information correlated with the color thereof. 3. First information correlated with the weight of the vehicle body and second information correlated with the color of the vehicle body.

ChatGPT:

ChatGPT

Here's an evaluation of each option:

1. First information correlated with the weight and second information correlated with the color of the vehicle body.

   • Nuance: This version is concise, but the separation of "weight" and "vehicle body" might make it slightly ambiguous, as it doesn’t explicitly link "weight" to the vehicle body.
   • Best for: Informal or less technical contexts where brevity is prioritized.

2. First information correlated with the weight of the vehicle body and second information correlated with the color thereof.

   • Nuance: "Thereof" is formal and precise, but it can sound old-fashioned or overly formal in modern English, particularly in non-legal or non-patent contexts.
   • Best for: Legal or highly formal technical documents where traditional phrasing is preferred.

3. First information correlated with the weight of the vehicle body and second information correlated with the color of the vehicle body.

   • Nuance: This version is clear and unambiguous, though it repeats "vehicle body." It aligns well with technical writing norms that prioritize precision over brevity.
   • Best for: Technical or patent-related contexts where clarity and exactness are essential.

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Recommendation:

• Use Option 3 for technical contexts (e.g., patents or specifications) to ensure clarity and avoid ambiguity.
• Use Option 1 for less formal contexts where conciseness is acceptable.
• Use Option 2 only in formal contexts where "thereof" is appropriate and expected.