予想問題①

旺文社予想問題の英作文。

お題：ネットいじめはもっと厳しく禁じられるべきですか。


Internet bullying should be strictly prohibited. And I explain two reasons why I think this.

To begin with, we should consider the impact on victims.
Most of the Internet bullying are likely to go on by anonymous people.
Then, such bullying puts too much pressure on victims.
If some victims are going to result in suicide, none has responsibilities for it.
Secondly, on the Internet societies, people's self-defense is not perfect.
The way of self-defense has not been established.
So, a different person has a different way to protect himself or herself from such bullying.
In short, only regulation can protect them.

For these reasons, I believe that the government need to ban people from bullying on the Internet with more strict laws.

スペルミスが２語、三単現のs脱落が一か所。（もう直してあります。）

文法は、最終文を、

For these reasons, I believe that the government need to ban people from the Internet bullying with more strict laws.

としたのを、上のように直しました。
接続語が足りない感じ。でも、17分で、これがイッパイイッパイでした。

しかも、時間がなくて、読解を途中で放棄して書いたのです。読解は、途中で捨ててしまったので、28／41点。あかんやん！！
30点は、ほしい。

受かりそうになくても、6月受検をするつもり。