お題：オリンピック選手が競争力を保つには、政府の基金にしかありませんか。
I don't think that government funding is the only way for Olympic athletes to stay competitive.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.
First, it is effective for many big companies to tie up in order to help athletes.
Olympic is symbolized as the global peace.
Today, in Japan, the government is going to encourage companies to manufacture and to sell weapons.
But, I guess the international society won't welcome this situation.
If they cooperate to fund for Olympic rather than wars, they will get more credit in the world.
Additionally, Olympic committee members receive too high salaries and rich backing.
Being compared with those of the athletes, it is extravagant.
Also, they should cut the cost, such as expenditure to show their monetary power to other countries.
So they should fund more money in order to build better facilities.
For these reasons, I believe that there are still some ways for Olympic athletes to stay competitive.
50分かかり、語数オーバーです。
I don't think that government funding is the only way for Olympic athletes to stay competitive.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.
First, it is effective for many big companies to tie up in order to help athletes.
Olympic is symbolized as the global peace.
Today, in Japan, the government is going to encourage companies to manufacture and to sell weapons.
But, I guess the international society won't welcome this situation.
If they cooperate to fund for Olympic rather than wars, they will get more credit in the world.
Additionally, Olympic committee members receive too high salaries and rich backing.
Being compared with those of the athletes, it is extravagant.
Also, they should cut the cost, such as expenditure to show their monetary power to other countries.
So they should fund more money in order to build better facilities.
For these reasons, I believe that there are still some ways for Olympic athletes to stay competitive.
50分かかり、語数オーバーです。
