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2017-01-24 15:19:03 | 日常
1級面接、過去問からの改題で、また、準1受検のための英作文演習を再開しますね。


お題:ホームレス問題は、現代社会に避けがたいことでしょうか。


Today, economy has been getting worse in Japan.
The top of the politicians is declaring that situation is becoming better.
However, it has still been too difficult for poor people to survive.
Now, I explain why I think so with two reasons.

Firstly, it's supposed that economy has been mainly initiated by rich people.
Political schemes are planned to let them spend money for investiment.
It has never seen the difficulties of poor people.
Because the amount of taxes collected from them is a little.
In short, the layer of poverty never has monetary power to move political issues.

Secondly, most people in poor are living in rental houses or rooms.
When financial schemes leave them behind, they are likely to lose their jobs.
Then, they can't afford paying their bills for living spaces.
So they will become homeless sooner or later.
Because spending for living spaces is the largest rate in their consuming.

For these reasons, I agree that homelessness is inevitable in a modern society.


ざっと書くのに45分かかりました。
準1英作文の語数を大幅に超過しており、削るなどし、さらに時間を費やしました。

私も、働いてはいますが、年金の支払いもままならぬ貧困層におり、決して他人事ではありません。
前向きに書きたいけれど、到底できません。

貧困アピールをしたいわけではなくて、他人事でない気持ちを申し上げたい。

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