お題：政府は教育に基金を増やすべきだと思いますか。
I agree with the idea that education should get more funding from the government.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, in Japan, poor children have been increasing.
Their circumstances are making them have too much difficulties to receive good education.
The government should give them more helps by spending more money for education.
This is because that some parents are too poor to let their children even go to schools.
Secondly, Japanese education system is more taxing on parents than the other developed countries.
It leads most parents to suffer paying their children's education because of the shortage of funding from the government.
For these reasons, I believe that the government should more support such parents by funding enough for good education.
19分で書けましたが、冠詞の抜け、三単現が一か所ずつありました。
I agree with the idea that education should get more funding from the government.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, in Japan, poor children have been increasing.
Their circumstances are making them have too much difficulties to receive good education.
The government should give them more helps by spending more money for education.
This is because that some parents are too poor to let their children even go to schools.
Secondly, Japanese education system is more taxing on parents than the other developed countries.
It leads most parents to suffer paying their children's education because of the shortage of funding from the government.
For these reasons, I believe that the government should more support such parents by funding enough for good education.
19分で書けましたが、冠詞の抜け、三単現が一か所ずつありました。
