まだ準１級にも受かっていないのに、書いてみたくて。１級過去問の、英作文です。
お題：国際社会からテロリズムを根絶できると思いますか？
I disagree with the idea that international terrorism can ever be eliminated.
And I have three reasons to support my opinion.
Firstly, I hate such terrorism that allow people to kill others, to destroy constructions, and to lead to break into international wars.
But the cause of infection with terrorism is almost despair, sorrow, and hate that resulted from wars of the past.
So I think it should be given the priority to eliminate wars and conflicts around the world.
However, it is too difficult to do that.
Reflecting human's historical background, we found that it have been the very history of killing and depriving for millenniums.
Secondly, if international relations should have been keeping the world from conflicting, such terrorism has never been born.
But actually, more and more nations have been associating with conflicts of neighborhood's countries in order to protect their own benefits.
Except for changing the international relations into offering amicable nations not to use arms, it is unable to eliminate the terrorism.
Finally, some countries have failed their educational policy.
They have made their children and students hate opposite countries.
Under the cold war in the past the capitalism and the communism had been disgusting each other.
They have concealed their seeds of hate.
For these reasons, I assume intenational terrorism can be hardly expelled from the world.
210語ぐらい？
40分ぐらいで書いて、ゆっくり見直しました。
お題：国際社会からテロリズムを根絶できると思いますか？
I disagree with the idea that international terrorism can ever be eliminated.
And I have three reasons to support my opinion.
Firstly, I hate such terrorism that allow people to kill others, to destroy constructions, and to lead to break into international wars.
But the cause of infection with terrorism is almost despair, sorrow, and hate that resulted from wars of the past.
So I think it should be given the priority to eliminate wars and conflicts around the world.
However, it is too difficult to do that.
Reflecting human's historical background, we found that it have been the very history of killing and depriving for millenniums.
Secondly, if international relations should have been keeping the world from conflicting, such terrorism has never been born.
But actually, more and more nations have been associating with conflicts of neighborhood's countries in order to protect their own benefits.
Except for changing the international relations into offering amicable nations not to use arms, it is unable to eliminate the terrorism.
Finally, some countries have failed their educational policy.
They have made their children and students hate opposite countries.
Under the cold war in the past the capitalism and the communism had been disgusting each other.
They have concealed their seeds of hate.
For these reasons, I assume intenational terrorism can be hardly expelled from the world.
210語ぐらい？
40分ぐらいで書いて、ゆっくり見直しました。
