お題：スポーツ行事が国家間の関係を良くするとあなたは思いますか。
I agree with the idea that international sporting events are good way to improve relations between nations.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, the Olympic event is the best example.
We are able to feel empathy with various country's people by watching the event of the Olympic immediately or on TV.
It will be likely to let us know that everyone around the world has been making efforts in order to open to the new vision of getting love and peace.
Secondly, sporting events almost impressed us that having a healthy and strong body is excellent.
Most athletes have been exercising for attending such events. Their bodies are so beautiful that we can eliminate the prejudice of the racism.
For these reasons, I believe that international sporting events have a good role to improve relations between nations.
ざっと書き上げ20分。
タイピングでスペルミスなどをいくつか発見。
前置詞の使い方が、わかっていなかった箇所も。
I agree with the idea that international sporting events are good way to improve relations between nations.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, the Olympic event is the best example.
We are able to feel empathy with various country's people by watching the event of the Olympic immediately or on TV.
It will be likely to let us know that everyone around the world has been making efforts in order to open to the new vision of getting love and peace.
Secondly, sporting events almost impressed us that having a healthy and strong body is excellent.
Most athletes have been exercising for attending such events. Their bodies are so beautiful that we can eliminate the prejudice of the racism.
For these reasons, I believe that international sporting events have a good role to improve relations between nations.
ざっと書き上げ20分。
タイピングでスペルミスなどをいくつか発見。
前置詞の使い方が、わかっていなかった箇所も。
