お題：都市化は、日本の社会によい効果をもたらしたと思いますか。
I disagree with the idea that urbanization has had a positive effect on Japanese society.
And I have three reasons to support my opinion.
Urbanization has led to the industrial situation change dramatically.
More and more young people have been moving from rural area to urbanized area such as Tokyo, Osaka, and so on.
This is because they are more able to choose their job at the developed cities than to do it at local regions.
Also, they are able to receive better education, since a lot of universities and colleges have centralized at such big cities extremely.
Firstly, each local society lost its young population.
It caused the result that each local government became poor.
Losing young workable people means less income taxing them.
Now, many local governments are struggling to keep their institutions, after putting their workforces out.
Some local organizations have already collapsed by their economy broken.
Additionally, after young people have left their home regions, the rest of people have been aging simply, but having less children in such local societies.
So their human relationships have been changed.
Such rural communities lost their variety of generations.
I guess old people in rural areas are missing their successors and are feeling lonelyness.
Finally, it is concerned many traditional cultures that local people have grown are disappearing in such regions.
Young people seem not to be going to take over such cultures.
For example, they often see their country's own culture as a tedious and outdated thing, being more attracted by urban events than a traditional dance called a bon-odori.
For these reasons, I think that urbanization has had a negative effect rather than a positive one.
無茶苦茶かもしれませんけれど、アップしておきます。
英作文を書く頻度が減って、書き進まず、悪戦苦闘してしまいました。
１級の英作文は、自分には難しすぎるようです。
近く受けるサンプルテストは、２級か準１級程度の内容。制限時間もありますし、そちらのほうの慣れを、取り戻さなければなりません。
でも、性分で、１級過去問の英作文をやりきってしまいたいというか。
16年版、あと３回分あります。
１級の過去問は、単語もがんばってもうてるねんけど、それは、いまやっても意味ない感じがするので、単語をスキップし、英作文演習の時間をもっと、取りたいな。
I disagree with the idea that urbanization has had a positive effect on Japanese society.
And I have three reasons to support my opinion.
Urbanization has led to the industrial situation change dramatically.
More and more young people have been moving from rural area to urbanized area such as Tokyo, Osaka, and so on.
This is because they are more able to choose their job at the developed cities than to do it at local regions.
Also, they are able to receive better education, since a lot of universities and colleges have centralized at such big cities extremely.
Firstly, each local society lost its young population.
It caused the result that each local government became poor.
Losing young workable people means less income taxing them.
Now, many local governments are struggling to keep their institutions, after putting their workforces out.
Some local organizations have already collapsed by their economy broken.
Additionally, after young people have left their home regions, the rest of people have been aging simply, but having less children in such local societies.
So their human relationships have been changed.
Such rural communities lost their variety of generations.
I guess old people in rural areas are missing their successors and are feeling lonelyness.
Finally, it is concerned many traditional cultures that local people have grown are disappearing in such regions.
Young people seem not to be going to take over such cultures.
For example, they often see their country's own culture as a tedious and outdated thing, being more attracted by urban events than a traditional dance called a bon-odori.
For these reasons, I think that urbanization has had a negative effect rather than a positive one.
無茶苦茶かもしれませんけれど、アップしておきます。
英作文を書く頻度が減って、書き進まず、悪戦苦闘してしまいました。
１級の英作文は、自分には難しすぎるようです。
近く受けるサンプルテストは、２級か準１級程度の内容。制限時間もありますし、そちらのほうの慣れを、取り戻さなければなりません。
でも、性分で、１級過去問の英作文をやりきってしまいたいというか。
16年版、あと３回分あります。
１級の過去問は、単語もがんばってもうてるねんけど、それは、いまやっても意味ない感じがするので、単語をスキップし、英作文演習の時間をもっと、取りたいな。
