お題：結婚は、昔と比べて重大事でなくなったと思いますか。
I disagree with the idea that marriage is becoming less important today than it was in the past.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, it is helpful for people to marry as much as aging.
Most married couples are supposed to get their children.
While feeding and growing them, such couples would have struggled, though, they must be going to become more happier, after they finish feeding their children.
This is because they will be able to feel more relatives to help each other in their surroundings.
Secondly, it would be less intelligent life if a person has not married.
Through the whole life, he or she would become aware of various things by getting married.
For these reasons, I believe that the marriage is still important even now, comparing with it was in the past.
ざっと書いて19分、見直して24分。
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I disagree with the idea that marriage is becoming less important today than it was in the past.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, it is helpful for people to marry as much as aging.
Most married couples are supposed to get their children.
While feeding and growing them, such couples would have struggled, though, they must be going to become more happier, after they finish feeding their children.
This is because they will be able to feel more relatives to help each other in their surroundings.
Secondly, it would be less intelligent life if a person has not married.
Through the whole life, he or she would become aware of various things by getting married.
For these reasons, I believe that the marriage is still important even now, comparing with it was in the past.
ざっと書いて19分、見直して24分。
タイピングでミスを発見できませんでした。
