きょうのお題:両親共働きの家族が増加の傾向にあります。あなたは、この傾向が、今後も続くと思いますか?
I agree with that the number of families in which both parents working will increase in the future.
I have two reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, in Japan, women's view about working has been changing.
In the past, families of both parents working were associated with poverty.
It was supposed that women's happiness were just at home after marriage .
But now, working women's image has turned into smart one.
Secondly, people's preference had changed, too.
Once, it was granted for married couples that they want more two or three kids.
But these days, the couples that want to few kids are increasing.
For these reasons, I think that the trend that the number of families in which both parents work is increasing will continue.
きょうは、37分もかかって、間違いも多かったです。
married を marriaged だと思いこんでいて、見直しのとき、悪戦苦闘してしまいました。
I agree with that the number of families in which both parents working will increase in the future.
I have two reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, in Japan, women's view about working has been changing.
In the past, families of both parents working were associated with poverty.
It was supposed that women's happiness were just at home after marriage .
But now, working women's image has turned into smart one.
Secondly, people's preference had changed, too.
Once, it was granted for married couples that they want more two or three kids.
But these days, the couples that want to few kids are increasing.
For these reasons, I think that the trend that the number of families in which both parents work is increasing will continue.
きょうは、37分もかかって、間違いも多かったです。
married を marriaged だと思いこんでいて、見直しのとき、悪戦苦闘してしまいました。