英作文32

お題：政府は、子供のいる人々に財政援助をすべきだと思いますか。


I agree with the idea that the government should provide financial support for people who have children.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with in Japan more and more children have been struggling in their poor circumstances.
It is also a educational issue.
So the government should more help them go to schools, particularly, high schools.
Actually, some people have already argued that going to all high schools should be for nothing.
But, the government won't respond enough.
Secondly, the number of children has been decreasing these days.
If the government won't more take care of them, the decreasing will be more accelerated.
In short, it is helpful for the government to provide such supports.

For these reasons, I believe that the government should give the financial help for people who have children.


ざっと書き上げ、18分。見直しも含め、初めて、20分でできました。
タイピングで、冠詞の抜け落ち、スペルミスを一か所ずつ発見しましたが、内容に問題のないレベルでした。

手早く書き上げられたときは、ミスも少ないようです。
やはり、もっと突っ込みたいところで、自分に使いこなせる語彙を選ぶのが、肝心なようです。

英作文31

お題：教育の責任は、保護者にも、学校と同じようにあると思いますか。


I disagree with the idea that the responsibility of parents should be as well as schools.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with, the role of parents is different from the one of schools.
For example, parents should make efforts to keep their children's healthy growth.
But, it is not the pay-backing job.
On the other hand, schools are paid for their giving education.
In short, teachers are educational workers.
They must make children get high scores and achievements as great as possible.
Secondly, if parents are required to have their educational responsibility, some poor parents can't afford it.
They have no choice but to depend on school's teachers.

For these reasons, I think that the responsibility of parents should not be discussed on the same stage that school's educational responsibility has being discussed.


これは、時間を測るのを途中であきらめました。
親としても教師としても、当事者ですし、自分の想いのあふれてしまうお題は、難しいですね。

英作文30

お題：人々はあまりに物質的になりすぎていると、あなたは思いますか。


I disagree with the idea that people have become too materialistic.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with, most people realize that having rich mind is the most important for them in order to become happy.
But it is too difficult to have it, then, people are going to become materialistic.
This is because it is more easy for them to buy materialistic things, such as products that have been boosted by shops.
Secondly, more and more people have been interested in spiritual things, such as thinking of why they were born.
They are understanding that they need not only materialistic things but also thinking what make them happy truly.
But it is the most difficult to find out how to think in order to have rich mind.

It is for reasons that I think that people don't become so materialistic.


ざっと書き上げ、24分。直して27分。
タイピングしながらスペルミスを一つ発見。

英作文29

お題：家族の重大な決定について子供と話し合うべきだとあなたは思いますか。


I agree with that the idea that parents should discuss important family decisions with children.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with, I guess that children almost realize what is a issue at home. For example, they have noticed that their parents may be going to divorce when their parents are going to decide it.
This is because children are more earnestly watching their parents than parents are looking at their children.

Secondly, children always look like thinking of nothing because of the awareness that they feel it is good for them to let it be.
They often have more rich wisdom than adults do.
But they are rarely given the chance that they can mention it.

It is for reasons that I believe parents should discuss important family decisions with children.


ざっと書き上げ、30分。語数を大幅に超過し、削るのに時間をかけてしまいました。