お題：食事や栄養について子供たちにもっと教えるべきだとあなたは思いますか。
I agree with the idea that it should be more done to teach children about diet and nutrition.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, these days, it has been concerned about children's eating habits.
Children have been more likely to eat snack food than natural food.
It is supposed that because both of their parents are too busy to cook the meals for their children.
So children need to diet themselves.
Secondly, it is important for everyone to acquire the knowledge of healthy diet.
If people would have given these knowledge in their childhood properly, they would have been more careful to their healthy issues during their whole lives.
For these reasons, I believe that children should be given more and more knowledge about diet and nutrition.
ざっと書き上げ18分。見直しをして21分。
恐ろしいことに、初めて、タイピング中にも、ミス検出をしませんでした。
I agree with the idea that it should be more done to teach children about diet and nutrition.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, these days, it has been concerned about children's eating habits.
Children have been more likely to eat snack food than natural food.
It is supposed that because both of their parents are too busy to cook the meals for their children.
So children need to diet themselves.
Secondly, it is important for everyone to acquire the knowledge of healthy diet.
If people would have given these knowledge in their childhood properly, they would have been more careful to their healthy issues during their whole lives.
For these reasons, I believe that children should be given more and more knowledge about diet and nutrition.
ざっと書き上げ18分。見直しをして21分。
恐ろしいことに、初めて、タイピング中にも、ミス検出をしませんでした。
