きょうの英作文15

きょうのお題：子供は田舎で育ったほうがよいと、あなたは思いますか？


I agree with that growing up children in the countryside is better than doing so in the cityside.
I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with, there are more nature such as forests, wild creatures, and clear rivers in the countryside than those in the cityside.
If children grow up there, they will be able to have rich sense about natural lives and get more aware of their environment.

Secondly, today, children can learn school subjects even in rural area, as well as urban area.
This is because that online education systems have developed enough.
In the past, children grown up in rural area had disadvantages when they receive better education.
But now, such situation has changed.

it is for reasons that I believe children should grow up around nature such as in the countryside.


おなじ語句の反復をしやすいので、できるだけ言い換えることを意識して、30分かかりました。
でも、冒頭部は、設題の反復でよかったかなぁ、考えすぎて、そこで時間を食いました。
結論部も、やりすぎたかも。