お題:インターネットは人々のコミュニケーションをよいものにしたと思いますか。
I agree with the idea that the internet has improved communication between people.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.
Firstly, by using the Internet, people have been able to communicate with their families and friends at any time, and at the same time.
Since most people are too busy to have face-to-face time, it is helpful for people to connect with their important people by the Internet.
Secondly, it is also effective for business people to advertise their products online.
For example, they have been able to get more customers and to explain about more details of their products.
For these reasons, I believe that the Internet has improved communication between various people these days.
ざっと書いて18分、見直しをして21分。
タイピングでミスを発見しませんでした。
ノーミス(自称ですが)は、これが、初めてではないでしょうか。
I agree with the idea that the internet has improved communication between people.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.
Firstly, by using the Internet, people have been able to communicate with their families and friends at any time, and at the same time.
Since most people are too busy to have face-to-face time, it is helpful for people to connect with their important people by the Internet.
Secondly, it is also effective for business people to advertise their products online.
For example, they have been able to get more customers and to explain about more details of their products.
For these reasons, I believe that the Internet has improved communication between various people these days.
ざっと書いて18分、見直しをして21分。
タイピングでミスを発見しませんでした。
ノーミス(自称ですが)は、これが、初めてではないでしょうか。