英作文37

お題：人々の自動車への依存を減らすために、何かもっとなされなければならないとあなたは思いますか。


I agree with the idea that people's reliance on cars should more be done to reduce.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with, there are too much cars on roads to keep our safety from accidents.
More and more people have been involved in traffic accidents.
It's the shame these accidents have been commonly in the city.
People have to make efforts to reduce reliance on their cars.
For example, they should use public transportation rather than drive their cars.
Secondly, CO2 emissions should be reduced. too. Using cars is one of the main resources that pollute the environment.
I think that the government should more regulate not only using cars but also manufacturing them.

For these reasons I believe that people should not rely on their cars no longer today.


ざっと書き上げ23分。その後、スペルミスを２つ、適語でない箇所も。

英作文36

お題：あなたは、世間がかつてそうであったよりも危険なものになっていると思いますか。


I disagree with the idea that society is more dangerous today than it was in the past.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with, criminal issues seem to have been increasing these days, though, it means that the number of the incidents revealed has become more.
In the past, most of issues that happened in local communities were supposed to be concealed in order to protect local honors.
Today, local people are unable to hide it for the Internet technology.
Secondly, people have become to get their safety more strongly than it was in the past.
They are willing to protect their safety using double block goods, such as both of locks and keys.

For these reasons, I don't think that society is more more dangerous than past decades.


ざっと書いて22分。
直して25分だけど、タイピングで発見のミスが、５つも、、、、

間違いとわかれば語彙も増えるし、まだ、守りには入らないで、どんどん書いていきましょう。

英作文35

お題：あなたは、今日、男女が平等に就労できていると思いますか。


I disagree with the idea that men and women are treated equally in the workplace even today.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, men are more likely to be promoted than women.
For example, young men who have a lack of the sense of management may be promoted in order to learn the sense.
But young women are unable to be given such a chance.

Secondly, women's careers have been almost neglected.
In other words, it has never been reflected in the aspect of paying.
In short, womens salaries tend not to be upgraded.
Most of them are working at the same place still now, as they have more patience than men.

For these reasons, I don't think that men and women are treated equally in the workplace even now.


ざっと書き上げ21分、直して24分。
ところが、タイピングで、ミス４つを拾い、これは、多いわ、、、、
いまのところ、書くのが速くなったというだけですね。

英作文34

お題：プロのアスリートには、高給をとる価値があると思いますか。


I agree with that professional athletes deserve the high salaries they receive. And I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with, professional athletes are able to give dreams that efforts can turn difficulties into hopes to people.
Their outcomes are supposed the result from their efforts and struggle.
It seems to be worthwhile that we have watched and stuck to them.
If their salaries will be more higher, our dreams given by them will be more stronger too.
Secondly, professional athletes are unable to get a long term on the real stage. Their lives as the athletes are shorter than business workers.
Because of the earlier retiring age, they should be allowed to be given higher salaries than common workers.

For these reasons, I think that pro-athletes deserve to receive higher salaries.


ざっと書き上げ20分。
タイピングで、スペルミス２、文法ミス３を発見。

英作文、過去問

お題：学校を出てからも親と暮らす若者が、将来、増えると思いますか。


I agree with that the number of young people who live with their parents after they finish their education will increase in the future.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with, living alone is not safe for young people.
They have little understanding about safety.
While living with their parents, they should be going to learn the ways to live safely, such as how to prevent from fire accidents.
Secondly, living alone is more costly than living with parents.
If young people are willing to save money, it is the best choice to live with parents.

For these reasons, I think that the number of young people living with their parents after finishing their education will increase in the future.

16年第一回の過去問です。

ざっと書き上げ22分。
タイピングで、スペルミスを一つ、文法的にまずい箇所が一つ。
直したものをアップしています。


16年1回の、読解のほうは、きょう初めて解いて、41問中35問を正解。85パーセントという、過去最高のできばえでした。
英作文で稼ぐしかないと思っていましたが、読解が、思わず伸びたのは、単語の正答率が、飛躍的に伸びたからでした。

時間は、制限時間90分のギリギリ。

でも、やっぱ、うれしいです。がっかりするよりは、うれしいほうがいい。