きょうのお題：あなたは、ポータブルゲームプレイヤーを、子供にとってよい贈り物と思いますか？
I agree with the idea that parents give a portable game players to their children as the birthday gift.
I have two reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, it has been supposed that everyone hope to be given what he or she wants.
Most children are likely to want the same one when their friends already had such things.
But it is important for children how to use their time playing the game.
So, at that time, parents should give the good way to play it, too.
Secondly, if parents are willing not to leave children alone after giving it, children are able to enjoy the new technological things wholesome.
I hope children to play it by their parents, for example, during public transportation.
It is for these reasons that I think portable game players are good gifts for children.
28分でした。
賛成してるけど、反対しているようなものですね、、、
こういう書き方が、できるようになってきた、ということにしておこう。
I agree with the idea that parents give a portable game players to their children as the birthday gift.
I have two reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, it has been supposed that everyone hope to be given what he or she wants.
Most children are likely to want the same one when their friends already had such things.
But it is important for children how to use their time playing the game.
So, at that time, parents should give the good way to play it, too.
Secondly, if parents are willing not to leave children alone after giving it, children are able to enjoy the new technological things wholesome.
I hope children to play it by their parents, for example, during public transportation.
It is for these reasons that I think portable game players are good gifts for children.
28分でした。
賛成してるけど、反対しているようなものですね、、、
こういう書き方が、できるようになってきた、ということにしておこう。
