英作文53

お題：飲酒年齢を引き下げるべきだとする意見に、あなたは賛成ですか。


I disagree with the idea that drinking age should be lowered in Japan.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.

Firstly, drinking age should be suited the age that young people become socialized as adults rather than the age that their body's condition matured.
Otherwise, young people will be addicts easily by drinking.
This is because drinking alcohol needs the conscience.
It is hard for young people lower than twenty-years-old to have it.
Secondly, alcohol is one of the regal drags, originally.
It is helpful for people to enjoy drinking with their mates when deepening their communication.
But, it is difficult to do properly themselves.
They must realize different person drinks different way.
Young people have to understand it before starting drinking.

For these reasons, I believe that drinking age should not be lowered in Japan.


ざっと書いて21分。
タイピングでスペルミス１、三単現のミス１、発見。
ほかは、大丈夫そうでした。

今週は、ノック状態でしたが、明日から、一日一本ずつ、大事に書きます。
そして、あすから毎日、読解もリスニングも、過去問を一回分ずつ、おさらいします。模擬試験のつもりで。
明日から、ただただ、一回ぶんずつの執行あるのみ。

英作文52

お題：日本の医師不足は十分に対応されたと思いますか。


I disagree with the idea that it is enough to deal with the shortage of doctors in Japan.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.

Firstly, there are many small islands in Japan, such as the Izu-Oshima area.
People living in the area have inconvenience to see doctors. This is because these areas are unable to connect with the other areas without ships and planes.
When they face the emergency, they would easily be exposed to dangerous situation.

Secondly, it is not enough for people living in these areas to option the methods of seeing doctors.
Now, they should go to city centers, when they want to see doctors.
The government should start the services to send doctors to these areas regularly.

For these reasons, I believe that the shortage of doctors are not solved enough.


ざっと書いて21分。
見直し23分。
タイピングで、前置詞の使い方が不適切だったり、やはり、スペルミスを残していたり。
三単現も。

でもこれも、難しい内容ですね。
医師の派遣は、労働法で禁止されているというから。
書き上げてから、そんなことを知りました。

英作文51

お題：都市の中心部へ行くのに、自家用車の使用を制限すべきと思いますか。


I agree with the idea that people should be restricted from using cars in city centers.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.

Firstly, most of the city areas are more convenient than the other areas.
It is supposed that people are able to go to city centers without using their cars.
They should use public transportation, such as buses and trains.
By doing so, it is effective for people to reduce CO2 emission.

Secondly, restricting from using cars will be able to help the local government save money.
It can cut costs of construction of parking spaces.
I wish that using cars to go to city centers would be permitted for elderly and handicapped people.

For these reasons, I believed that people should be restricted from using cars in city centers.


ざっと書き上げ、19分。見直しをして20分。
タイピングで、スペルミス１、冠詞、三単現などいくつかミスを発見。

自分が車を使わないもので、駐車場がとっさに浮かばず。

書きっぱなしだと、うーん。合格ラインぎりぎりの答案かなとは、思います。

英作文50

お題：遺伝子組み換え食品を生産する国は、将来増えると思いますか？


I disagree with the idea that more countries will produce genetically modified foods in the future.
I have two reasons to support my opinion.

Firstly, it has been concerned that genetically modified foods might influence on our health.
So, some people have critical opinion about these foods.
Nevertheless, companies make and sell genetically modified foods because of cutting costs.
people who buy it are also willing to save money, even when they cook their own meals.
But, both of makers and customers will become aware of the importance of eating natural foods, rather than saving money.
Secondly, in the future, genetically modified foods will be revealed about their harmful aspects.
Once people see the real problems, they won't try to produce anymore.

For these reasons, I believe that less countries will produce genetically modified foods in the future.


ざっと書き上げ25分。見直し含め30分。
タイピングで、スペルミスを１、主語のあいまいな箇所などを発見。

遺伝子組み換え食品については、以前、買う人が増えるというのにagreeで書いたのを、途中で思い出しました。
経済的理由で、選べない人は、増えると思うんです。

でも、このお題は、遺伝子組み換え食品を生産する国が増えるかという。
問いのポイントが違うんですね。

食の、いわゆる豊かな国で、肥満などが問題になり、高脂肪食や高カロリー食に課税するなど、欧米の先進国は、食の規制に、たやすく踏み込んでる感じがします。
だとすると、ＢＳＥなどの問題をすでに抱えてしまった国で、遺伝子組み換えを禁止する国も、出てくると思うんです。

ですから、国の数としては、減る方向ではないかなと。当て推量で、書きました。