英作文26

お題：将来、私企業で働くより国のために働きたい人が増えると思いますか。


I disagree with the idea that more people will want to work for the government rather than for private companies in the future.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.

Firstly, working for the government will be more hard in the future.
In the past, it had been steadily good both of the income and the welfare system.
But now, that situation has changed.
This is because the government has begun hiring more pre-formal workers than formal employees.
These hired people should have the responsibilities as much as the formal employees for public.

Secondly, in Japan, some private firms are struggling, though, most big companies are thriving still now.

It is for reasons that I expect that people will prefer to work for as big companies as possible rather than the government.

書きっぱなしで24分。
語数オーバー、調整して31分。タイピングで、句法の怪しいところを整え、スペルミスを直すなど。

見直しは必須やな、、、

英作文25

お題：あなたは、海外からの観光客を日本へ呼び込むために、何かもっとすべきだと思いますか。


I disagree with the idea that more should be done to promote Japan to foreign tourists.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with, the government have been focusing on the tourism to promote Japan to foreigners.
It seems too much enhancing recently.
I'm sure that the Tokyo Olympics events will come soon, though, the government looks like that they have not considered enough after that.
More and more structures will be done for it, they will have to be deserted after such events.
The government should discuss these structures more.
Secondly, the government should spend more money in order to make sure the safety of people living in Japan.
The taxing will have been steadily rather than getting fee from tourists.

It is for reasons that I believe it should not be more done to promote Japan for tourism.


書きっぱなし28分。やはり、タイピングで、スペルミスを発見。
接続語が不十分ですが、語数が多いので、これはこれでもう、いじくらずにおきます。