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英作文42

2016-09-22 19:48:25 | 日常
お題:あなたは、新卒者を社員に雇用するのに賛成ですか。


I agree with the idea that companies recruit new employees who have just graduated from university.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with, it is necessary for a new employee to have modesty or obedience so as to learn running a job.
People who have just finished their schools almost hold it in their mind.
So they are going to learn how to do their job smoothly.
They will become helpful workers for the companies.
Secondly, the salaries that are paid to fresh men and fresh women who don't have real experiences at work are less than people who have it.
In short, companies have not to spend more money, if only they would have grown up as good workers at the same companies.

For these reasons, I think it is a good idea for companies to recruit new employees who have just graduated from university.


ざっと書き上げ20分。
タイピングで、スペルミスと三単現のミスを一つずつ発見しました。

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英作文41

2016-09-22 18:04:12 | 日常
お題:水道やガスの設備の使用は、政府が経営すべきだとあなたは思いますか。


I agree with that the idea that utilities such as water and gas should be run by the government.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.

Firstly, until now, some utilities that had been run by the government, such as the train line, have already privatized.
But it has resulted in more traffic accidents for careless faults by overworking human.
Most of privatized firms that had been run by the government are aimed to cut running costs.
But, we have to realize that cutting costs is often problematic because of these accidents.
Secondly, if water supplying would have been privatized, the qualification and safety might be concerned.
This is because that the serious issues are supposed to emerge later.

For these reasons, I believe that the government should run the utilities such as water and gas.


お題が、難しかったです。
ざっと書き上げ、24分。タイピングでスペルミスを一か所、時制の危うい箇所を一か所、発見。

なんにせよ、書き上げるだけなら、25分以内にできるようになったと、断言してよいでしょう。
あぁ、でも、難しかった!

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英作文40

2016-09-22 15:29:28 | 日常
お題:人々は家族と過ごす時間に、十分に、重きを置いていると思いますか。


I disagree with that people place enough importance on spending time with their families.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with, some children usually have their meals alone. This has become a social issue, hasn't this?
Also, it has been increasing for both of parents to work.
Actually, most children are unable to have enough time with their families.
Parents are going to work for making up their children's educational costs, though, this means that parents leave their children behind.
Secondly, parents often let their children go to crammers at night.
it is in order to let them study for higher scores.
But by doing so, children are going to spend still less time with their parents, too.

For these reasons, I don't think that people place enough importance on having time with their families.


ざっと書いて23分。
タイピングの際、適語のわからなかった箇所を直しました。
もしそのままだったとしたら、減点が相応にあるだろな、、、

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英作文39

2016-09-22 14:29:20 | 日常
お題:政府は再生可能エネルギーをもっと促進すべきと思いますか。


I agree with the idea that the government should do more to promote renewable energy.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with, it is not sustainable situation that people will have been relying on fossil fuels.
It has been said that such fuels are doomed to be run out in the near future.
The government should more stoically consider changing this situation.
Thinking of renewable energy is needed as one of the ways to change it.
Secondly, the potential possibility of renewable energy is expected higher than it was in the past.
Because of the progress of science technologies, the various methods have been able to turn waste things into renewable energy goods, today.
These innovations will more appear to our lives.
The government should encourage people to use these things.

For these reasons. I believe that the government should more promote renewable energy.


ざっと書き上げ23分。
タイピング含む見直しでのミス発見は、スペルミス1、前置詞抜け1でした。

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英作文38

2016-09-22 14:25:55 | 日常
お題:インターネットの拡がりは、社会によい影響をもたらしたと思いますか。


I agree with the idea that the spread of the Internet had a positive influence on society.
And I have two reasons to support my opinion.

To begin with, the Internet is useful media for people to learn the things of various range.
For example when a person feels sick, he or she is able to research about his or her condition immediately.
So people can detect their health problems earlier by using the Internet.
Secondly, people are able to share various issues such as each country's political problem, voting, and welfare system with foreigners directly.
Then people can compare their country's things with other country's things at the same time.
In short, people can feel global issues close to them.

For these reasons, I think that the spread of the Internet had effective results in the society.


ざっと書いて18分。
見直し込み20分ですが、タイピングで、三単現、スペルミスなどを一か所ずつ発見。

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