自由律俳句 Like Haiku - 其ノ六十三

仙人みたいなじーさんが公園にいた。

 

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（みたい、じゃなくて本物…？）

ヘッタッピな自由律俳句を、チラ見下さった方に感謝申し上げます！

 

There was anold man who was like hsien.

(If he wouldn't be like, he was a true hsien...??

 

*not sure about my English...