バッタ居て
階段踏む音
軽くなる
There is a locust
On the step
Walk up quietly
茶色のバッタ、久しぶりです。アスファルトの階段に馴染んでいる風ですが見つけました。
ところでもう少しこの五七五を発展させるかなと、もう少し季語を意識してみようかとかそんなことをなんとなく...考えてみています。
「バッタ」は秋の季語だそーで。
It's a brown locust, I haven't seen him(her?) for a long time. His colour of body looked like the asphalt, it wouldn't have been easy to recognize but I found him.
Well, I've been trying to make good "Haiku" or "Senryu". Haiku has to include season words, we have to remember them for making a proper Haiku.
"Locust" is one of season words for Autumn.
階段踏む音
軽くなる
There is a locust
On the step
Walk up quietly
茶色のバッタ、久しぶりです。アスファルトの階段に馴染んでいる風ですが見つけました。
ところでもう少しこの五七五を発展させるかなと、もう少し季語を意識してみようかとかそんなことをなんとなく...考えてみています。
「バッタ」は秋の季語だそーで。
It's a brown locust, I haven't seen him(her?) for a long time. His colour of body looked like the asphalt, it wouldn't have been easy to recognize but I found him.
Well, I've been trying to make good "Haiku" or "Senryu". Haiku has to include season words, we have to remember them for making a proper Haiku.
"Locust" is one of season words for Autumn.