iPS 世界初の移植 目の難病患者に 理研・先端医療財団 １年かけ治療効果確認
Type A:とりあえず、上記等の情報を基に行う口頭表現なら、以下の英文が生まれてきた。
According to a news report, medical treatment using the so-called iPS technology was carried out in Japan for the first time in the world in Japan. the treatment was done for the patient who are suffering from eye disease. It is said that the iPS cells were made from the patient's skin cells and it was transplanted into the patient's eye's cell. And the operation was finished successufully. The operation was carried out about seven years after Professor Yamanaka of Kyoto University produced the iPS cell for the first time in the world. This means it made a historic step foward in this medical field.
Type B:しかし、人に読まれる英文を意識して英作するとしたら、どうなるかと考えて、ちょっと格好をつけたつもりのものが、以下のものです。
On Wednesday, September12, RIKEN(Institute of Physical and chemical Research) and Foundation for Biomedical Research and Innovation announced that they transplanted the induced pluripotent stem cells to a patient who sufferred from a serious eye disease successfully for the first time in the world. The iPS cells were produced from the patient's skin cells and then were transplanted into the patient's retina. They say that the operation was done successfully, but they have to continue to confirm the treatment's effect at least for a year. This is the world's first clinical application to a human body of the iPS technology since Professor Yamanaka Shinya successfully produced the iPS cells seven years ago for the first time in the world. There is no doubt Japan has made a big step foward in this promising medical field ahead of the rest of the world.
参考：多くの日本人の傾向としては、知らず知らずにtype Bの傾向で英作しがちです。しかし、この種の英 作の癖がつくと、英会話には弱いかもしれません。英会話というのは、精度が低くても、あらくて も、言葉をそれなりに続けるのがポイントだとすれば、あまり細かいことをきにせず言葉を出せ ばいいのではないかと思うのです。私はあまり英会話が得意ではありません。しばらくはType A
を意識したい。
Type A:とりあえず、上記等の情報を基に行う口頭表現なら、以下の英文が生まれてきた。
According to a news report, medical treatment using the so-called iPS technology was carried out in Japan for the first time in the world in Japan. the treatment was done for the patient who are suffering from eye disease. It is said that the iPS cells were made from the patient's skin cells and it was transplanted into the patient's eye's cell. And the operation was finished successufully. The operation was carried out about seven years after Professor Yamanaka of Kyoto University produced the iPS cell for the first time in the world. This means it made a historic step foward in this medical field.
Type B:しかし、人に読まれる英文を意識して英作するとしたら、どうなるかと考えて、ちょっと格好をつけたつもりのものが、以下のものです。
On Wednesday, September12, RIKEN(Institute of Physical and chemical Research) and Foundation for Biomedical Research and Innovation announced that they transplanted the induced pluripotent stem cells to a patient who sufferred from a serious eye disease successfully for the first time in the world. The iPS cells were produced from the patient's skin cells and then were transplanted into the patient's retina. They say that the operation was done successfully, but they have to continue to confirm the treatment's effect at least for a year. This is the world's first clinical application to a human body of the iPS technology since Professor Yamanaka Shinya successfully produced the iPS cells seven years ago for the first time in the world. There is no doubt Japan has made a big step foward in this promising medical field ahead of the rest of the world.
参考：多くの日本人の傾向としては、知らず知らずにtype Bの傾向で英作しがちです。しかし、この種の英 作の癖がつくと、英会話には弱いかもしれません。英会話というのは、精度が低くても、あらくて も、言葉をそれなりに続けるのがポイントだとすれば、あまり細かいことをきにせず言葉を出せ ばいいのではないかと思うのです。私はあまり英会話が得意ではありません。しばらくはType A
を意識したい。
